(04 Dec 2018, 12:30 AM)leona Wrote: Can you all give me some feedback on this spoken word video I've made for school? Thank you! Any help would be much appreciated!!
https://youtu.be/kYe09ymaA_M
I like it, but i would recommend you stop mumbling over your words and try your best not to do retakes.
If you're gonna perform this @ your school i recommend practicing the piece and add more power, also make sure you're much more passionate about your piece and put more effort.
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