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A cool poem :) hope u like it......
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A cool poem :) hope u like it......

When the war of the beasts brings about the world’s end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting. Infinite in mystery is the gift of the goddess We seek it thus, and take it to the sky Ripples form on the water’s surface The wandering soul knows no rest. There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh. My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return. My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world’s end The wind sails over the water’s surface Quietly, but surely. Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return To become the dew that quenches the land To spare the sands, the seas, the skies I offer thee this silent sacrifice.

hope to get some comments saying if you like it or not :)
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Re: A cool poem :) hope u like it......

Sounds Nice. :)
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Re: A cool poem :) hope u like it......

Good job :up:
How long did it take you to make this?
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Re: A cool poem :) hope u like it......

1-2 weeks
And thx for liking it :) :lol:
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Re: A cool poem :) hope u like it......

Tight poem. Good job.
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Re: A cool poem :) hope u like it......

Thx for the nice comments xD
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