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Hello there, Can someone proof read this if there's a mistake like punctuation or grammar or spelling mistake.
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Cybersecurity is critical because digital assets are valuable and vulnerable with so much of daily life, online bank account access to names and addresses. Cybercrime can also make lots of money and cause untold damage. Cybersecurity is also important because of how common cybercrime is in 2019. 32% of businesses identified cyberattacks and other security breaches. That does not account for those who were infiltrated without realizing it. That figure has also increased big corporations with lots of valuable data that aren’t the only targets, either; security breaches happen to small businesses too and even to random individuals. Cybersecurity is so important because everyone could be a victim. It is important because in May 2018, GDPR allows for large fines to be administered to companies who do not comply with the requirements of the act.
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RE: Need Proofreader

(11 Sep 2022, 08:08 AM)st0rm Wrote: Hello there, Can someone proof read this if there's a mistake like punctuation or grammar or spelling mistake.
Help me to find out.

    
Cybersecurity is critical because digital assets are valuable and vulnerable with so much of daily life, online bank account access to names and addresses. Cybercrime can also make lots of money and cause untold damage. Cybersecurity is also important because of how common cybercrime is in 2019. 32% of businesses identified cyberattacks and other security breaches. That does not account for those who were infiltrated without realizing it. That figure has also increased big corporations with lots of valuable data that aren’t the only targets, either; security breaches happen to small businesses too and even to random individuals. Cybersecurity is so important because everyone could be a victim. It is important because in May 2018, GDPR allows for large fines to be administered to companies who do not comply with the requirements of the act.

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Cybersecurity is critical because digital assets are valuable and vulnerable.  With so much of daily life being online, bank account access to names and addresses has become increasingly easier over the past decade. Cybercrime can also make lots of money and cause untold damage (Clarify, what damage?). Cybersecurity is also important because of how common cybercrime has become. 32% of businesses identified cyberattacks and other security breaches. This variable does not account for those who were infiltrated without realizing it. The percentage has also increased because big corporations with lots of valuable data aren’t the only targets, either; security breaches happen to small businesses too, and even to random individuals. Cybersecurity is so important because anyone could be a victim. Although cybersecurity is important without incentive to do so, that choice was taken away in May 2018. Now GDPR allows for large fines to be administered to companies who do not comply with the requirements of the act.

Changes are made in yellow, I also recommend that you get Grammarly, it is free and can help with grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors.  Hope this helps. 
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