Spoken Word: Lost

Spoken Word: Lost

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RE: Spoken Word: Lost

(04 Dec 2018, 12:30 AM)leona Wrote: Can you all give me some feedback on this spoken word video I've made for school? Thank you! Any help would be much appreciated!!
https://youtu.be/kYe09ymaA_M

I like it, but i would recommend you stop mumbling over your words and try your best not to do retakes.
If you're gonna perform this @ your school i recommend practicing the piece and add more power, also make sure you're much more passionate about your piece and put more effort.
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10 Dec 2018, 04:24 AM

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Spoken Word: Lost - by Valentina - 04 Dec 2018, 12:30 AM

RE: Spoken Word: Lost - by Kite - 04 Dec 2018, 01:49 AM

RE: Spoken Word: Lost - by Kermit - 04 Dec 2018, 09:40 AM

RE: Spoken Word: Lost - by Hanzsu - 10 Dec 2018, 04:24 AM

RE: Spoken Word: Lost - by Phoenix - 18 Dec 2018, 05:13 AM

RE: Spoken Word: Lost - by Apollo - 24 Dec 2018, 01:42 PM

RE: Spoken Word: Lost - by Valentina - 24 Dec 2018, 02:15 PM

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