[SmG deletboi.exe]

Looks pretty decent, but a little criticism:


The flashiness and the pop-outs at 0:16, the way some elements do that and not in sync makes it a bit confusing. Maybe do that to every rock formation like those, or even do a similar effect to the player elements, just with a little flashiness. You've seen some of those old-school montages, I'm sure of it. They were too flashy, of course.