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Is This Good?
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profession not proffesion
Yeah, saw it at first glimpse, correct it, not sure if there are any more spelling errors, I checked it over, but it seems fine. :P

Oh, and it's pretty cool.
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Alright thanks guys, and thanks Pirate. Was waiting for a Grammar Nazi to help me proofread. :)
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good info :Check:
good pics :Check:
good reasoning :Check:
good summarization :Check:
A little busy but I think it's still nicely done :up:
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#14
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Two comas between 'concert choir' and 'chorale'
17 Feb 2012, 10:11 AM
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Thanks Bravo.
And thanks Marshy for the compliment.
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17 Feb 2012, 06:55 PM
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#16
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SmG Bravo Wrote:comas
comma

and, fix your sig!
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